Really wasnt feeling it. the beat was ok, U need to change Ur flow. U cant leave the beat behind unless ur next line catches up to it in a ill matter. U need to put more emotion into it, or U'll keep sounding like if Ur reading it off a page. I practice this almost as much as I do my writing. check out Triple N's shit above me, his flow is ill but some niggas might hate on his vocals cuz they aint too crazy so it feels like wat he says is limited and it dont sound too good in a luv song.
Id give Ur song a 6 out of 10, dont settle for this score, suprize us wit Ur next one. my audio is in my sig, check it out and hit me up wit some feed back.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..