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aight...since this battle is lookin heated...ill break it down...
Gods Son
Ya names spelled wrong its supposed to be envy, you cant contend me why the 2 E's you look like a faggot
You came with a pair or E's but I cum harder on ya mom wit a Full House with Bob Saget
attempted personal in the first line...didnt connect though...mom punches r played to death...so that punch was wack... - 4/10
Correction, I erase -what-you-scribble- my verse has more "bounce" than big breasted chicks -who-can-dribble- ~ !
Envvees not a part of the game like the monkey -in-the-middle- his "well" is "dry" when he squirts like girls -with-no-nipples- ~ !
good wordplay and metas in the first line...good wordplay and metas in the second...theres not a punch though...that takes away from this line... 3/10
A win for you? Nahh you''ve -got-shit-bent- I "murder" verses fuck this juvenile -de-linq-uent- ~
Ya verse is poor, it -makes-no-sense-(cents) you were undefeated -hence-the-tense-? ~
once again...good metas and wordplay in the first line...as well as good metas and wordplay in the second line...u attempted a punch, but it didnt connect... - 3/10
This rookie chokes cuz I -fuck-up-starters- I leave "stains" on clothes like -felt-tip-markers- ~ !
Your whole game is soft, my -aspects-are-harder- its like I have my own religion the way i turn -haters-to-martyrs- ~ !
pretty good metas and wordplay in the first line, as well as in the second line...NO PUNCH THOUGH...took away from this line... - 3/10
Uneven in talent, for you this -just-isn''t-fair- my lyrics are so "bright" they leave -your-vision-impaired*- ~ !
-Your-like-squares- they way you get smoked and dissolved -in-the-air- Envee your another overconfident newbie, you spit -but-nobody-cares- ~ !
good metas and wordplay in the first line, as well as the second line...again...the punch in the second line connected a little bit... - 5/10
Overall - 18/50
ur structure is wack as fuck...which throws off ur flow...u had tight metas and wordplay, but for the few punches u had...they didnt connected...u attempted personals, but they didnt connect very well either...
Envee
This is like "Nas" dissin Jay, but I'm dissin a gay, publicity…he needs this.....
Plus you'd think I was God's son the way ya momz screamin out "Jesus"!....
to Gods Son, needs this and Jesus do rhyme...there was a meta in the first line...dont talk about moms man...that took away from ur punch a little, but it still connected... - 5/10
I ain't Pontius Pilate but I'm killin God's son witout a crucifiction
I guess in rap class this "God" didn't show, like if "Zeus was skipping"
ok wordplay in the second line...punch connected a little bit... - 4/10
Im puttin tha end 2 God 1st so i can leave tha weak son in controll...
Beat him in this battle and take over Earth like Police on parroll....
first line was a good set up...ok punch...didnt connecet very much though... - 3/10
My bars are gonna keep ya ass runnin like hourses doin thoes fuckin races...
Ill leave ya motherfuckin ass wit broken legs so u can park in Handicapped spaces...
decent wordplay in the first line...second line was ok...punch connected a little bit... - 3/10
I fucked Eve but my name aint Adam killed :tha son: and left earth 2 me...
This battle is uppin my record 2-2 cause i am a Battle Leader 2 be...
wordplay was nice in the first line...punch semi-connected... - 4/10
Overall - 19/50
structure was good...flow was on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...u had punches, some of them barely connected though...personals were good...
Conclusion
Gods Son focused on usin metas and wordplay with a wack structure and flow...Envee focused on usin a few metas, some wordplay, decent punches, and nice personals...and seein that punches and personals r more important then metas and wordplay...Envee had the better overall verse...so he gets my vote...
VOTE - ENVEE
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