Katie Compton R.I.P Baby

On the phone talking to my babys friends having a conversation...waiting for the train..waiting in anticipation
It arrives slowly, doors open and finally gets on the train…excitement of seeing my baby..it was hard to contain
I get half way and the train breaks down sighs in frustration..did I know there was worse to come..never in my expectation
Suddenly it gets going, 10 mins later I finally arrive..her friends says 20 mins late.
..damn I wish I could drive
We get a cab there I finally arrive to her performance destination. We rush to our seats..
..as I look for her face in desperation
The show ends as she walks towards me not knowing of the surprise..as she spotted me
..she had that sparkle in her eyes
She brings me over to meet her family they smile and greet..it all went well.
..the plot never missed a beat
Her mother takes me back to station as we talk and reminisce..we got on easy
… this aint nuttin but bliss
Said my goodbyes as my girl held my hand…its all going perfect
..just the way I planned
We looked at the time the train was due as we kissed ….not knowing what was ahead..
..it will go wrong coz sum1s train was missed
We look ahead and here comes the train in the distance.. I let her hand go..
But not with out resistance
I look at to my left and see this drunk stumble..something told me before it happened
..there was gonna be trouble
The train pulls in this drunk is dangerously close…she leant against the train
…Fell underneath right under my nose
This girl looked right at me I was the last person she seen…till this day if I think If I reacted quicker..How different would have it been
My baby screams but It doesn’t quiet the bone crack..as I go over and look at her
..i see her body dismembered on the track

plz can i have some feed back..this was a personal experience