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Old 07-07-04, 12:14 PM   #8
QBsmasher
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Iv'e read your flows, and you're really Just A Bitch Player/
I'm about to "drop bars" on this punk, like CLumbsy Brick Layers/

That shit was nice...And you closed the battle well to..poor sweet heart.

DaTruth had the better punches...shit was right on par the entire time. Verbal I just wasnt feelin anything you were sayin, you had a lot of basic punches...sorta like just sayin hey man you suck...that wont win battles.

Datruth was on point with the flow and structure, was nice I could read it and feel how you wanted it to flow. Verbal you need to do something with the structure, and take out the numbers that doesnt help or stand any purpose. The flow just wasnt there for ya verbal...maybe if you fix the structure it would be eaier understood.

Some nice metas from Datruth, he brick layers, and the sweetheart i was rollin at that one. Verbal you gotta come with some stuff more than just some basic rhymes...the point is everyone can do the basic rhymes, so you gotta be creative to get peeps attention.

Overall datruth was just harder...more consistent...flowed better.

v/Datruth29