I had a vote that was DQed cause my math was wrong...I went back and revised it to look like this.

I'm about to get in this dudes ass, like when Gerbals Arouse Him/
I treat this like a Hool a Hoop, the way I "rap" Circles Around Him/
1st line makes me think your gay, but the 2nd one was syck 6/10
I'm yo Grim Reaper, my flow seems shallow but like pools it Gets Deeper/
Fuck RB, and I don't like yo Shit Either, I "damn"(curse)yo "flow" like Big Beavers/
Damning his flow like beavers that was creative 5/10
You get Zapped to Ash, coz like garbage men the stuff you Rap (wrap) Is Trash/
And you're not the type with massive cash, that, I think We Know/
Dont understand the massive cash, but the garbage line was nice 5/10
You reading musical staffs is the only time that you count C-Notes (money)/
The 1 on yo check's lonley Without Zero's, pick up the pace like you Dropped It/
the C-note was creative I liked, the 2nd line was a filler though 5/10
U not a MC, You could pour cement all on da "Stage" and still couldn't "Rock It"/
You're just Not It, so Stop It, you rhyme like you sleep walk Uncocious/
Im not sure about using rock it and concrete together :-/ 2/10
You're last battle was a true and total dissappointment/
It seems that you and whackness are stuck together like Conjoined Twins/
This was a complete filler 1/10
He Licks Ass, I Kick Ass n spit cold flows til saliva solidifies n I Choke on Ice/
"Unorijinal", You need to quit, you seem really drained, like Broken Pipes/
this first line was creative 6/10
As a matter of fact, i'll cut yo arm off if I ever see you Hold A MIC/
not a bad closer 4/10

34/80


Let ‘da truth’ be told, I’m half this niggaz age N still I defeat him in a lyricist contest/
This guy couldn’t flow any better, even if I gave him a full-blood test/
Good opener 7/10
I emphasize on his age ‘cuz I’m 14, he’s five years older, but couldn’t beat me/
I’ll put my M-16s to ya face make have dots like you had full-grown acne/
M16s make ya have dots? 2/10
He’s 19 years old, a nerd, his whole idea of men suckin each other is called romancin/
I’ll put this dude to sleep shoot ‘em wit my desert on his feet, let this bitch do breakdancin/
not really a hard punch coulda been better 3/10
His occupation says “EMT”, wonder what he does for a living to make pay/
‘Eatin’ Male Testicles’ everyday, then he opens up Orijinal’s CD and presses ‘Play’/
Nice personal....6/10
Don’t make any excuses like you on your ‘job’ or you had writer’s block/
Cuz’ you had until 2 o’clock, his dick so small, he couldn’t beat even if he was a “dick-jock”/
Mediocre punc 5/10
Nigga, rushin’ me while he had a 50 minutes drop a fuckin verse, 16 lines/
29-60-1 I know what you’re thinkin, that his record, no, it’s not his waistline/
im not sure where you got that from? 1/10
So now nigga, you’ve learned your ‘lesson’ and no, I’m not teachin’ in college/
But, right now I’m the one who graduated high school, and U da freshman wit no knowledege/
This was more of just a filler 1/10
Let me give this bitch a ‘bangin’ closer, maybe some fireworks tomorrow/
Maybe I’ll give him ‘tips’ during “E.M.T.”, but I ain’t talkin about money, talkin about ‘hollows’/
Good closer also...fireworks and tips i liked 7/10

32/80

v/datruth

The math comes up to be 34-32, can you please recount my vote...thank you.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133085


Handled