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Old 07-07-04, 01:26 PM   #13
Ca'lam
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lol.. nice punches guys..

i liked the way you guys kept it simple.. ok the breakdown

QB: i liked the way you had some nicce punches at the very start of your verse.. i was feelin em.. towards the end you started to "stall" just a little bit.. but it was a decent verse overall...

GEE:iv got to say, if all of your punches hit as hard as your first bar did, this battle would have been easily yours.. that line was pretty tight.. even tho i heard it before, it was still a nice play off of his name.. prolly the best personal in this battle.. but that was your hardest line.. after that it got kinda boring because you didnt change the subject.. you were on his name to much, or maybe it was just the personals you were trying to pull off werent hitting..

to me this battle was QB's.. Gee id say you need to hit and move on, dont try and hit on the same stuff to much or you will lose the readers interests.. which is very bad

v/QB
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