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Old 07-07-04, 02:19 PM   #19
Durmil
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 464
From: Wastalands
IP:

Sire
look kid, I'ma beat your ugly head open
you're better off....
than online, so just log out instead of postin
6/10....wordplay was there but the punch was weak
I'm launchin the end.... of you're RB career
DeLeon's got the Blueprint
.................of my fuckin fist on his ear
7.5/10....i like the concept..good play on his crew name
kids got the brains of a chimp, catch my drift?
got the jump off poppin...
when he landed at the bottom of the cliff
7/10...decent
no surprise he comes dope, when it's me he's facin
DeLeon's on my dick
so when I get hard, he'll rise to the occasion
7/10..liked the punch but the phrase is played
call me the laugh doctor, shit almost comical
I have no patients....
& I need some, so I'ma put him in the hospital
7/10...it was ight
beatin me's impossible... let it go, it's over son
like you 68'd me
..................I leave you owe 'n one
8/10...i see where u were goin with this...i like the wordplay...by far ur best bar

Overall-42.5/60....good flow and wordplay...punches could of come harder..personals and name plays were ight...pretty good verse

Deleon:
Mods…U really want me to square wit him…Aight…here I come
I’ll feed your tank top w/ pellets like fer fish in an aquarium
8/10...dope punch...good wordplay
Call this an obstacle?...please who said this kid's a threat?
im sending him back to square one like rookie smokers on their 1st cigarette
8/10...1st line decent..2nd dope (this line aint stretched whoever said that?)
This is how a Hard-Wood Class-sick suppose to go your rep is getting torn
hes an alias…but your verses need extension cords….. to get restored
7/10...pretty decent
Murkin this herb wont land me any kind of respect….
Cuz hes known to talk out his ass like Eddie Murphy in Shrek
8/10...haha funny and creative..solid punch
What I write kills….play your role and follow Capitols drills
cuz Even If You Put Aleve In A Rope you couldn’t tie-pill (type ill)....
8.5/10...dope ish right there...i used an aleve line kinda similar once haha good shit D
So I’m gonna finish this herb and put an end to his text..
History Repeats itself watch another Sire get sentenced to the death....
7/10...ight...it was good but the punch was lacking for a closer

Overall-46.5/60...better then sire's verse...i was feelin ur punches more i liked ur wordplay better..it flowed just fine...dope shit homie

Vote-Deleon...he came harder