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Old 07-07-04, 02:26 PM   #50
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alright this was an okay Topical.......both had good points....and everything else.....Structure I would have to give that to X just becasuse his was even all around and more put together.......flows wasnt that bad but it was a little stretched in some places.....Flow i would have to say that was a tie because both had good flow and i was feeling both the same......Imagery I would give thgis to flow just because i felt his had a little bit more imagery in it then X's......Creativity I would have to give the creativity to X becuase i felt this was more creative and more orignal with the insite and everything then flows........and Emotion I would have to say that X takes the emotion becuase i was feeling all the shit that he was saying and it had more emotion in his verse then flows

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