Murkz
seein as orijinal said only ur first verse counts ill go off of that...structure is wack...seperate ur damn lines man...there was no flow, which makes that wack...no metas...no wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Orijinal
dont put the /s at the end of u r lines...its newbish...structure was wack...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchness....no metas...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected...personals r pretty good...

Overall
neither had metas...both had a wack structure...Orijinal had the better flow, cause at least he had one...he had more, and better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Orijinal gets my vote...

VOTE - ORIJINAL

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...