First of All, my vote automatically goes to QB because at the top it says 10-16 linez and the Matrix wrote 100 linez...

but as far as the competition anyway

Trigga Matrix your verse was cool, but lay off of the violence thing and be more creative.. All of this talk about skull crushing and selling oragans isn't appealing to me all threw the verse.. one line will do.. the punchlines were sub par by my standards..
stucture was horrible.. flow wasn't there either.. just practice more...

QB had a better opener.. after than you had some good multies in there also, like the anestetic-poetic sequence... the only thing is that i don't get the flonase part, it prolly just needs to be elaborated to me...

V/QB