Yehti pretty nice verse man. The structure was tight...nearly perfect. Nice punches and I was really feelin the flow.

Infared you need to get some structure, cause i cant pick out how you want the shit read. Makes it appear as if there is no flow to it. You need to be a lil more creative with it and throw some harder punches. I really couldnt pick much of anything out of your verse.

v/yehti