Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Nice battle....
GEE I was feelin ya from the start pretty god shit. The opener was nice, then you added to it and said you get all the wins and Os. I guess you were meaning noone votes against you. The flow was pretty good, structure was a lil off, fix that and the flow will be superb. The punches were damn hard, some real nice personals...I liked that. Some nice metas in there also, and ended with a multi.
Exogenious...I wasnt really feelin most of ya lines. You had a few in there that wasnt rhyming. At time your structure was all over the place....so I couldnt really keep up with ya. Towards the in you really seemed to fall off, as this was where a lot of things werent rhyming. You did try to use some metas though but they really werent that hard towards GEE.
v/GEE
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