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Old 07-07-04, 05:13 PM   #7
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Fuse I was feelin a lot of ya verse...but you had a lot of streched lines, esp when you got to the end. That really hurt ya flow, and ya didnt end it too well either...A few good punches and some nice metas though.

Brotha you had a nice structure broken down into bars...you also though had some streched lines though. Ya flow wasnt as bad as his wasm but jeep the structure tight as it helps ya flow. I thought brotha came with a few harder punches, and he marginally wins the battle.

v/Brotha