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Old 07-07-04, 05:40 PM   #14
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-Lyriclesolja.
yo ima leave this dude shook wit a stupid look,
you a bitch in everybodys rhyme book,
average flow, no wordplay, weak diss
so dont deny it and try to be defyant,
cause your lyrics are wack and not very relyant,
doesn't flow, no worplay, weak diss
o this about this next line and what ima bout to say,
your worse than a fag you just a wannabe gay,
coo flow, no wordplay, weak punch
so come out of your hiding place and face this music,
im givin you permission to bite go ahead and use it,
i should get arrested for this shit im too abusive,
aight flow, aight wordplay, played out punch
you wack at this shit get used to loosin,
you cant get a vote you need to get stiched up cause im lyricly brousin.
average flow, weak wordplay, weak diss


-Brothahood.
When I flow its like I designed rap n made a new invention
All this man does is rap like he stuck in his own dimension
average flow, coo wordplay, not really a diss/punch
305 posts n he aint won a battle? He just a try hard
get a life man u 19 u degenerated retard
average flow, no wordplay, aight diss
solja I read ur life thru ur profile I can tell ur personality
ur game is weak u need ta get a grip on reality
doesn't flow, no wordplay, weak diss
only time u find this fool flowing is after a late night vindaloo
all his shit doesn’t make sence his mouth cant even get off tha loo (toilet)
aight flow, aight wordplay, aight punch
U kill ur self wit ur flow n trap ur self wid ur bars like u in jail
Now am a realease u frum the game man like u out on bail
average flow, coo wordplay, straight punch
Lyriclesolja I picked u fo a easy win n I aint gon get surprised
Ur flows r like ur dick……..circumcised.
average flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
am a end this shit now with out a second mention
i bet this kids realy about 13 n stuck in detention......
average flow, no wordplay, weak diss


Overall, Brotha got this. He had punches and wordplay some/most of the time. Brotha, work on your creativity and wording. That's your main faults. Lyricle, work on forming punches, using wordplay, creativity, and wordplay.


Vote - Brothahood.