i ignored that first part.. cause i didnt like it..
lmao... the break..
DONS VERSE:
Re$tricted:
the idea of a sex change now thats got yopur mind conflicted...
low asteem and dick...shit leaves his girls felopians restricted...
^5/10.. didnt understand it.. maybe oyu needed a link ?
Deleon:
here we got the mexican floated to america...settle the new world...
twice is too much bitch...your bitings for girls...
you dumb no fake personal here...i can easily tell it...
peep his first battle wit L.I....he asked how to spell it...
^lol.. that was decent..7/10
Deadly:
Deadlys the best outa this bunch...a real queen in a beehive...
jus sad..wen people first heard your voice it was when xbox went live...
go ahead i kno ull win this...but inside you still a fuckin loser...
neva commited crimes...no files on record you like a new computer...
^flow was off a lil bit.. 3/4 lines were aight..3rd line was wack tho..6/10
Lyrically insane:
tell em wat u told me...u got prewrites saved so you dont seem overrate...
and he dont fill in location...cause you not hard if it reads Mansion Estate...
he puts up away messages...sayin hes ballin so it may seem...
jus stop you fuckin fake...you didnt even make the freshman team...
^stretched..and it was iiiiite 6/10
now one of you i kno and the rest i dont...
but jus put up your dreams...will u make it?...no you wont...
^no....
"Vets" verse ..
...1st Off to diss this wanna-be...The original rookie of the month...DeLeon!!...
How long can your wackness last, Pity ain’t enough to get u props..
You got to HAVE respect for us to diss-respect your drops..
I just landed an ill blow, something you cant do, now get off your back
Your verse aint shit to us its cause we just 'Brush' it off like 'Plaque'
^decent 7/10
...Up to tell yall how it goes...My boi...R Rated...aka...Restricted!!...
Stunna Number 1...Shut This Don Bish-Up With My Magic Wand..
Thought You Was Hot..Poof With Proof and Now Your Gone..Yep!
I'm Dropping Hot Like Summer..You Drop 20 Below Freezing..
Punches Got Ya Chest Collasping..Breath Be LiL Like Weezy..Yep!
^eh.. ok 6/10
...You know who it is...the one...the only...L.I.!!...
He got his hopes up just like those of hang gliders…
This kid gets more losses than Banks does dickriders…
Should give him a shovel the way losses are all he digs…
Yah skills are poorly put together just like your sig…
^nice personal. 7-8/10
Ladies And Gent's..Please welcome Deadly Vision to the mic!!...
Ok kid let's end the quarreling now, we should bury-the-hatchet..
I should get out of the business of embarrassing- Italian faggots..
U Vs Vets?.. this aint a match cuz every thing that you spawn is basic...
plus ya styles more debated then war in islamic place's...
^liked the flow.. good punch..solid..8/10
overall vets out did you don.. i saw a nice one here or there form you.. but wasent nearly as consitant as theres.. i dont know how you expected to win this......... not tryna hate or nuffin.really.. i dont know why you did that lol..
hit this up with a honest one(s)
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133731 (me vs metascriptz.. 1-1, other dude forgot to poll lol..)