Banned: Cheating
From: DC (aka murda capitol) 501 boys |
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IP:
This was a good battle. Thuglife had it going in da beginnin but then he lost it towards da end. You need to stregnthen your punchlines and legnthen your lines. good try though.
Mimesis took this one cause his structure was da best. He had a nice flow to go wit it too. Your punchlines were good too but it got a little confusin and hard to read wit those extra lines but it was good.
Ok battle
v/Mimesis
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