Black
This dumb bitch been talkin shit since she been on the site
But can't back it, even when she rhymes with all her mite
OK. kinda for-seen the ryhme scheme. 4/10
Because wack rhymes won't suffice, especially in this battle
I'm merkin you senseless, droppin you like diseased cattle
cattle battle....again...seen it comin. 3/10
You pretend to be gangsta, you say you got serious slugs
But you can't pack heat online, quit tryin to be a net thug
its OK. 3/10
And you claim to be from underground atl., tryin to spit fire
You should change ya name to "thisgirlgetsrolledlikeafuckintire"
its original. I give it that. 5/10
For her to fight back would be pointless, like bj condoms
This bitch gets losses so easy, it seems like she wants em
Lol. good line. 6/10
So take this loss with you and head back to the underground
The way these punches hittin ya, you'll be 6 ft. under a mound
6 ft deep thing really played. 2/10
This wasn't horrible. I could kinda see the next line in my head tho before i read on. Seemed predictable. Work on using ryhme schemes that you wouldnt come up with right away. It'll help your verse alot. Nice Job.
23/50

thisgirlspitfire
This fruit is just anotha nigga nothin I cant handle
Smoke and write rhymes nigga I stay lit more than candles
Get your body all twisted up torn down and dismantled
You talk about yourself. flo is off. 3/10
who the fuck is plague nigga “nobody” this cats a clown
you’ve been on my dick since i got here like is away to get around
nigga nigga nigga all u say......an u have a dick? 1/10
you’ll get shot down when you hear that sound cuz i do pack hella heat
You flow is old its decomposed and these parasites on you like dead meat
heat meat....not too exciting. weak punch. 3/10
And no you dont want to battle me and get me brain stormin
These flows I spit get hotter and hotter burn you up like global warmin
Good metiphore. 5/10
You cant spits homie its borin im snorin waitin for your best rhymes nigga its a drag
I feel none of your punches but im treatin and beatin you up like punching bags
predictable ryhmes scheme. stretched. played punch. 2/10
You wasn’t ready you came to quick haha i bet you hear that alot
I dont wanna have to park my fist in yo head like cars in parkin lots nigga
nigga again....original closer. 5/10
Not that bad. I suggest you don't use nigga as many times as u use it but thats me. Your closer was pretty good punch I liked it. Try an keep your lines even. It helps your flo.
19/60

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