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Old 07-07-04, 07:34 PM   #5
Terumoto
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Both: In a 2 bar punch battle, you really gotta hit hard and get personal.. and both your verses werent hitting as hard as they should.

Mixtape: I wasnt feelin your wordplay, or flow.. lines were stretched in the first bar.. which def isnt good in a 4 line battle.. but your closer was nice, flowed well, hit pretty hard.

E-dubz: better wordplay and opener, but what brought you down was the lack of a complex rhyme scheme, and that "lyrical stake" stuff is VERY played... like.. every battle i vote for pretty much someones killin someone with a lyrical sumthin.. it just doesnt hit hard enough..

so it comes down to e's opener vs mixtapes closer.... so i reckon mixtape took it..

v/ mixtape

yo. return the favour.. need votes on the battles in my sig
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