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Old 07-07-04, 07:51 PM   #9
The Black Plague
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Malefic won this with better wordplay and better punches... Beezy lacked wordplay and complexity

Malefic- Nice verse, you came solid in all aspects. You had better wordplay than beezy, which helped you, and your punches hit nicely. I think you could've flowed a little better tho, but your flow still wasn't bad. Your personals connected, and your closer was tight. Good verse.

Beezy- Your verse wasn't bad, it just wasn't all that good. You needed better wordplay, your punches weren't bad, they just couldve been worded better. You had nice flow, and your personals also were pretty decent. You need more complexity and depth in your lines, but not a bad verse. Elevate.
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