SC: This was close. You came with an arsenal of nice word play and multies. nice strategy I think. structure was okay. nice personals...unless they were fake....punches were not up to par...overall solid verse

Gotta: This was close. You came with a couple nice lines that were about average. Your structure wasn't all that good ...which made it hard for me to read plus the spelling...you got potential. I always thought you were real real weak...solid verse

v/state

any of you'll return the favor

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