Murkz
structure is good....flow is nice for the most part...no good metas...u attempted some wordplay, but it came out wack...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals...

Mc:Xplicit
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...but uhhh...structure is ok...u had some stretched lines though...flow fell off a little because of the stretchness...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals....

Overall
Murkz had the better structure...as well as the more stable flow...neither had good personals...Mc:Xplicit had more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Mc:Xplicit gets my vote...

VOTE - MC:XPLICIT