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Old 07-07-04, 11:16 PM   #7
QBsmasher
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A pretty decent battle from you two.

I noticed from from the start that Forsaken had the flow down pat, and the structure was pretty nice too. I dont understand all the ...... though, was that cause you had a streched line in the middle? Mr. Goodbar your shit flowed aight when you said it out loud, not too much on the structure though, a few streched lines.

The punches were taken easy by Mr. Goodbar, he was all over the personals. I did like the line from Forsaken about you couldnt sweat me if we battled in a gym lol that was cool. I think Mr. Goodbar came a lot harder here though with the personals. However lay off the your girl cracks, crack the dude your battlin. I think those jokes are so lame just like mom jokes.

A few good metas from both of yall, a slite advantage with Mr. Goodbar here though. Mr goodbar was also usin a few nice multies.

Overall i liked Forsakens opener better, and Mr.goodbar's closer. so it kinda tied there.

Mr. Goodbar was a lil more consistent with it though, and came harder with the punches.

v/Mr. Goodbar