QBsmasher
structure is good...flow is on lock...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

illiance
structure is nice...flow is on target...u had some metas...wordplay was tight...only a few of ur punches connected, most of them were either played (moms number in ur pocket, etc. etc.) or just not connecting...no good personals...

Overall
illiance had better wordplay...both had a good structure...as well as a solid flow...both had some metas...neither had good personals...QBsmasher had more connecting punches...and seein as punches r more important then wordplay...QBsmasher gets my vote in a pretty close battle...

VOTE - QBSMASHER

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