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fleXivity
structure is good...flow is on target...no metas...wordplay is pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...
hotshh!
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...thats gay...other then that...structure is good...flow is good for the most part...good metas...wordplay is pretty nice...a few of the punches u had connected...the rest was self glorification which is wack in battles...no good personals...
Overall
hotshh! had more, and better metas...both had a good structure...as well as a stable flow...both also had pretty good wordplay...neither had good personals...fleXivity had more connecting punches...and seein as punches r more important in a battle then metas...fleXivity gets my vote in a pretty close battle...
VOTE - FLEXIVITIY
PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...
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