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Old 07-08-04, 01:01 AM   #14
QBsmasher
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Xplicit was on point with the flow and structure, murkz you need to work on ya structure so that ya flow will be better. You even had a few lines that didnt rhyme like ya closer...you gotta finish off battles hard. I aint really think either of ya started out too hard. Both of ya did have some streched lines also, but Murkz was just all over the place with it. Drop some more multies in there, and some metas to show some creativity. Xplicit was just harder, and more consistent with what he was doin.

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