EXPLICIT
structure was good...flow was on target...no good metas...wordplay was tight...most of ur punches connected...personals were ok....

Khaos_daRenegade
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...but uh...structure was decent...it was to simple though...flow was on lock...u had a few metas...wordplay was simple and wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Khaos_daRenegade had more metas...EXPLICIT had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...EXPLICIT gets my vote...

VOTE - EXPLICIT

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...