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Old 07-08-04, 01:09 AM   #6
Triple_N
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ok kinda weak battle

Polifick...weka verse son, your closer was alrite but thats the only line that gets any respect, your flow was ok, structure need to be tighted up, metas well you tried but it just didn't work, personals again you tried but nope it didn't really work.

Flow: 6/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Structure: 4/10
Overall: 26/50

State.....nice opener, that was ya verse's highlight, but the micheal punch was bad that brought your verse down, an you did go downhill from the opener, your metas were weak but a lil stronger than polificks, your flow coulda been better, strucure I wasn't feeling it.

Flow: 5/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 7/10
Structure: 5/10
Overall: 29/50
Vote: State
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