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Old 07-08-04, 01:14 AM   #10
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EXPLICIT your punches hit pretty good and you had some good personnals. your flow and structure was easy to read. Overall not a bad verse.

Khaos_daRenegade your flow and vocab was kinda simple. punches weren't really hittin neither was your personnals. your lines were kinda short...just try to elevate some.

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