Scriptive
structure was ok...ur lines started out stretched, but then u took them back down...flow fell off cause of the first half bein stretched...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

BigChase
structure is pretty good...u had 1 stretched line though...flow fell off a very small amout cause of that one stretched line...no metas...wordplay was good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Scripitive had more metas...neither had good personals...BigChase had the better structure...as well as a slightly more stable flow...he also had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...BigChase gets my vote...

VOTE - BIGCHASE

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