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Old 07-08-04, 01:48 AM   #14
Terumoto
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explicit ripped him in every area.. flow was a lil off in some places, n ya lines stretched a couple times.. punches n wordplay not that good but better than ren's

renegade.. you gotta work on your rhyme scheme... simple flows are very shit... gangsta punches mean nuthin on the net man.. elevate

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yo return the favour, need votes on me vs hoops.. just one more
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