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Old 07-08-04, 06:57 AM   #6
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BK to tha future - First verse ya lyrics was tight. But ya structure was confusin. You had some bars crammed into one line and others separated into two. Saw a couple of decent punches. Yo second verse wasn't as good as ya first. You should consider separatin yo bars to two lines. It's easier to read. Overall you did alright. 5.5/10

Eyedentity - First verse ya came harder than BK. ya lyrics and punches were ahead of him. And you definately win on tha structure level. Second verse. Hot Shit. Flowed nice and lyrics was tha best outta all 4 verses. Only thing is closer could of been better. But you got this. 7/10

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