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Old 07-08-04, 07:09 AM   #11
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aiight, hoops, you had some good lines, opener was pretty tight, but like sum otha peeps is sayin, tha second bar about mastabation was too much, tha see more line was a bit childish, but it still worked, tha rappin fo class line was pretty tight, i liked that. and tha closer was aiight 2. overall, it was a good verse, i liked it.

aiight one man, u got a good style dog, tha opener was aiight, tha line about him bitin yo style was pretty tight, n u carried it on well with tha minus-tha-skill line, i didnt git why u said u hate doin gay jokes then did one right after that.. tha rook in disguise line was tight like prom night nigga i liked that one lol

basically, i was feelin bands verse mo. he came with sum good punches n kept it goin throughout tha verse.. good battle tho.

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