lyric
you had one good punch line and that was it the rest was selfglorification..or filler
diss the person..diss on his name....be personal
personals win battles....structure could have been better flow was on point but it was aight..elevate

brotha
you had harder hittting punches good flow
wasnt really feeling that structure...
the bar space bar..wasnt feelin it...but you had the better verse

vote/brotha for better verse overall