people worship these scriptz like text from the bible//
dude, youd be ignored if u didnt put catchy phrases fa thread titles//
Ok start, good personal
lyrically active, my flows graphic//
im partin dis cats chest,like fire trucks do traffic//
i liked the similie about parting
CUT stop actin, u da type to get rob an cage yaself in ya base//
but, ur hackin, how think u a 'hood' emcee wen u copy an paste?//
ok... nothin too special....
i aint gotta rap complex, to test, brother hoods text//
beaten da best, my flows considered better den sex//
good rhyme sequence.. no real punch
unlike dis trash emcee, i dont got to talk bout killins, to get me winnins//
barely even sinnin', sweepin garbage emcees an im not even kiddin'//
good point in first line...
breakin egos, cats is cryin,im not lyin//
friendly battle right? waitin fa da signal to start tryin//
????????????????
I didnt even have to try an ryme, cuz in da first 2 lines//
i MERKED ya WHOLE SCRIPT AHEAD OF TIME//easy
nice closer......
uppin fa votes checkin out ~~1~~

I'm not repeating everything you said brother hood, coz I can't quote twice, and I don't feel like hand typing your whole verse.. but

your first bar was ok, good little punch..
second bar I didn't understand
third bar was kinda weak to be honest wit u cuz...
fourth bar.. senseless, y ask him is he new to the elite, he never said that..
5th bar.. no meta's or punches.. c'mon cuz..
6th.. again.. weak, sorry
7th.. just some claims made, no punches..
8th.. closer was ok.. it made since.. a mediocre punchline...

ok..

opener..nova
wordplay.. nova
stucture.. brother hood
metas.. nova
closer.. tie

V/Nova Unlimited