To make tomorrow better, to make my mind~right..
Tears well up, taint my vision, blur my eye~sight,
As I realise tonight Ima cry as I write...
Wishin I would die, coz I can't win My~Fight.

^^^ i really like tha ending part of it... i really felt it cuzz it was nice and was decent... i like tha flow and jam to it... make me feel you and the way ur fightin... goood shit yao... keep it up

peace n wun