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Old 07-08-04, 01:46 PM   #19
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 994
From: Sa-Town
IP:

shit this nigga thinks he is hot cause he is ill tempered…
after I spit so sick leave this bitches body lyrically dismembered
ok..could of been better
I knock this nigga down first round and he don’t want no more..
This bitch is done… put a fork in him.. And im only on line four..
lol...decent
why they call you ill tempa anyways… cause ur rhymes arent sick
you probably caught a std u bound to from riding so much dick..
nice punch..LOOL
With all the herbs u have ko’ed that’s practically cheating
nigga with that wack verse…my cock is the only mc ur beating*
lol...decent
Bitch you couldn’t handle me even when I was in Fatal Tactic
u always got a hard wood everyone knos that so it aint a classic
this was ok nothing special..lol

a good drop...you had some nice punches and personals flow was good
struc too...just keep elevatin...good verse


7/10

Ill Tempa

Yo Genecide, that’s yo name? It sounds like a “STD”//
This nigga must be crazy thinking he can “fuck” wit me//
first line was wack..2nd was ok
There’s no way, shape or form that ya lyrics could harm me//
Cuz I’m gonna rip you like clothes from tha Salvation Army//
decent
You say ya flow is tight and you nice but no one believes ya//
And yo “structure” is fucked like tha “Leaning Tower of Pizza”//
a fake personal?....aight bar
You wanna represent for your people in this battle, tha Fatal Tactics//
I’ll outline yo whole crew in chalk and leave Genicide in a bag of plastic//
Blah! no punch

It’s amazing how I come up with these lyrics, some may say it’s magic//
My spits are “Hard”, structure’s sturdy as “Wood”, I’m a true “Class-Sick”//
Self Glorification....no punch just talking bout yourself

Yo rhyme scheme is distorted beyond belief, ya lines is stretched like elastic//
I’m gonna be nice and give something away, here’s a loss, you can have-it//
ok..better
You know I’m “hot” cuz I live in Florida where it’s always “sunny”//
And always handle my beef, cuz I got more “straps” than a “mummy”//
again self glorification
People laugh at you punches, cause they corny not funny//
It’s ILL Tempa I do more damage than a crash test dummy//
Blah...1st was aight 2nd self glorification..no punch
I think you learned yo lesson, so go back to geekin on yo computer//
I got one last question, answer honestly, how’s it feel to be a loser?//
ok prob your best bar of your verse

your verse was weak...your didnt really throw any punches and most lines
your talked about your self..but your struc was aight and flow was good

6.5/10


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