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Old 07-08-04, 06:16 PM   #45
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lilchio....
your in....but while you in this crew you will learn to elavate.....
first off....heres somethin...work on that structure...too hard to read...
and it fucks up the flow.....be more creative....and have better vocab....
thats it for now.....check in.. to confirm...but your not the recruitor....

the structure should be like this...
line 1..XXXXXX
line 2..XXXXXX
the lines should be even..makes the flow on point...

and lady krytn......you can be our femcee....
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