Wow, this was pretty bad....

SparSin sounded monotone all the way through the verse. You need to put some emotion in your voice, whether its real or fake. Punches were lacking a bit and quality wasn't all that great. You might have walked away with this though if you put some emotion in your spit.

Ill had a little more emotion in his spit. He came hard and it sounded a lot harder than SparSin's did. I liked a couple of his punches, but he was lacking in this department too. Quality could have been better.....

Vote - Ill Tempa.......just overall better rounded verse

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