^^^ Not to bad for a new b. Yo verse was straight but need to work on yo structure.
separate ya lines so it's easier to read... LIke
flkdjaslfjlsdjflkjdslgjldjglgdjslgkjdljd go/
ldkfjldksjafljdslkfjldsjflkdsjlkfdjslkjf ho/

fdjkslajfdljsodfslkfslkjfldjlfjdskljdlkf no/
dkjfldsjaldfjlksjljflkdjsfljdljflkdjlkdfjk sho/
But you straight