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Old 07-08-04, 06:44 PM   #10
PoEtIc JuStIcE
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o.k....
kinda different from most topicals ive seen....
more like an open mic piece
original anyway...props

ok....no hate but da jokah took this...beta structure and flow
his verse had the better vocab and imagery...

lil....ur verse rhymed..but jus 2 basic,wasnt all that bad but not good enough...


plz can both yall return a vote
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n if yall got anymore battles open id b happy to hit em up

peace