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Old 07-08-04, 07:47 PM   #9
fluidmoon
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mistah_tate: you had a nice smooth flow to ur verse...ur personal hits off his name were good, i thought ur punches were strong and ur wordplay with "face off" was hot too....good structure also, u came hard in ur opener and ended off consistent all the way thru.....overall tight verse
verbal violence:good opener and flow in the beginning, structure was alright, some trouble with spellin and shit and kinda stretched lines(a couple)"nuttin left of him"line and "jason" line, but ur shit was good,but u kinda fell off a bit at the end and couldnt quite stay as strong as u did in the beginning..................nice job both but
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