I'm out to drastically break even more laws than this kid eva knows *
He slobz down gay lyrics more than wen dope, smokes and grows **
Decent line so far.. had a nice punchlines
I smoke this bitch because he thought he was actually dope ***
Study wat I wrote and look at it clearly then just write some notes
it could have been alot better but had a nice rhyme sequence
Killin you drastically thats how you’ll remember your death ****
Like a shot to the heart this is ya last moment to take a breath
lol.. nice shyt one of your best lines
This is a sincere apology my bad your life was so pitiful
Demonstration blood poured on the alter like a spiritual ritual
iight iight another decent line had ..a nice punch in it
Nine lines is all I need to show this bitch aint not so drastic
Wen I go rampant, ya get ya ass kicked, loosin is ya habit
not a very good finisher... could have been alot better

overall this was a very close battle but ima have to give this one to

vote=lethal lunatic

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