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Old 07-08-04, 09:53 PM   #19
shadow
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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lethal
When you "release some anger", you line jae asshole with grease...
Mastermind underneith, and says "Im loving this breeze!...
hahaha funny 7/10
Jae throw ya "tonsils on the court" cuz ya lyricz "choke on ballz"...
Jae couldnt "hold my flow" if ya stood between me and the stall,...
good punchlinne 7/10
i swing "punches" leave jae with a "neck brace"....
like "skeletons" doin "push-ups" he just a "dead weight"....
simile and good comparisin 8/10


jae

Nigga you better leave this game alone.
For I make you hang up ya mic like a telephone.
meh not good 6/10
Jae Burnz be on the move, so u can say im roamin like a cellular fone.
Fuck if u not in view, ill hit u from long distance like a tellular fone.
fair punchline 7/10
You homo, Put this needle in ya but, and get the lethalNJection.
Post up and i block, so u can call it a freethrow rejection.
gettin better 7/10

my vote goes to lethal for better flow strucutre and punches all around better
my vote lethal
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