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damn this was a tight battle very hard to say but ima have to give this one to shadow...
Forgotten flow
your verse or should i say peice was good but some off it was off... you were as if introducting the topic and telling a story or a imagery peiece .....you had nice flow....lovely imagation ...lovely peice but it was alittle sharp around the edges...you had some nice structure but could have been better if put in the center..
overall nice peice....
overall:8/10
shadow
damn that was a nice peice it..had lovely emotion's ...nice imagery.....and beutiful ..structure..it was all on point just alittle was off but it was enought to beat...forgotten flow... also you had some nice rhyme sequence very good..
overall nice piece as well
overall:9/10
Vote=Shadow
nice battle from both but i really think he took it
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