Gee
Your improving quite a bit. I liked your start. Good find on the O's. Those are the kind of personal's that Im talkin about. The non-obviouse one's. Good one. Definitly gettin better wit your flo also. Fix your structure just a tad tho.
Exo
Not a bad drop also. Same wit the structure. Also you need to create more flo. Try to mix more multi's in there. I like a few of your metiphores as well jus harden up your punches.

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