hmm.. i liked this battle alot.. my kidn of topic hehe..
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forgotten: i was feeling it.. even tho the way you were writing it, was a lil wierd.. like i would give a shit about fighting for tupac or biggy lol.. but to each his own hehe.. i was liking the twist.. it was simple, but had a good effect and hit just as hard as a verse filled with vocabulary.. i would say this was over a good solid topical verse.. 8/10.. enjoyed it alot..
shadow:at first i wasent sure about it, but it grew on me *snickers*..after all, after i was done reading it, i was impressed on the imagery that you had in it.. i was there and i saw everything taking place.. this was very detailed and it had a nice flwo to it.. i would have to say i enjoyed this verse better because, it was actually on a war of some sort that made since..
forgotten i enjoyed the verse, but fighting for big and pac isnt exactly a good war to be fighting lol
.. big ups to you both for very enticing verses..
My vote will go to shadow..
if you could, return a vote or two to one of my battles in elevated fron lines.. not hard ot spot em, they are like on the front page (my former name was Hoops)