I'm not gonna vote here seein as it may be considered a hate vote or whatever cuz me and tempa and hardwood all have a battle goin on... but heres what i thought

Sparsin- As far as potential goes, I think you packed with it... Your verse was tricky, I hated it but I liked it as well... I think your style of delivery is good but it lacked emotions and feeling... If you can work on this and make me feel what you thinkin through your voice then you will accumulate some v's... as it is now though it took alot away from your flow.... Good Luck in the future..1

Ill Tempa.... Ya shit was decent- I think you basically gotta do the same thing as sparsin, but you need to add somethin to ya flow to make it more interesting-- whether it be switchin up your delivery or what have you... experiment with your sound some more cuz you got the idea but your still missin somethin... Good Luck in the future 1...

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