bleek:your structure is annoying.. you need to cut that out lol.. use like ~ at the end of youe line or somehting.. it wasent even in lines at all.. work on your structure and oyu shouldget a lil better..

brotha:you had some pretty nice punches int here.. i liked a few a of em.. lines were a tad strectched, but it was decent flow..vocab was decent.. decen verse all around.. nice job..


v/brotha hood

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