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Old 07-09-04, 06:56 AM   #14
Prodigy
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From: The Endz
IP:

~Stype~
This poor kid thinks he won just cuz I'm New to the Site
somebody should teach him to tie his Shoes when he Fights
^Nice opener good bar^

who the fuck's CFK? - I don't need a Crew to be Tight
I'm the type to abuse, you ever been Bruised wit a Mic?
^Again nice bar good punch^

already Losin' ya Life n' this is only my First Match
spit a Verse That'll Blast Verbs and make it this Herbs Last
^Not your best^

this is my Third Lap on your Word Track, kid's only 15
Yer so scared that ya Shakin and it's Makin ya Shit Green
^Lol back on track good punch^

this Kid's Team is so elementary, couldn't even Cop a Bottle
how da'fuck you gonna act a thug, when ya ass is from Colorado?
^Good punch and personal^

gimme a break, you haven't seen an emcee who's Gifted n' Flexin
I'm Shiftin ya Neck n' twistin ya body into Different Directions
^Good bar^

leave ya Blistered wit Redness, how's that for Verbal Violence?
I peeped some of your blurred rhymes but all I Heard was Silence
^Best bar so far, good punch and personal^

lacked votes, but I had hopes til I got to the Sixth Wack Verse
ya can't beat a vet wit a record that's better Flipped Backwards
^Nice close again good bar^

VV
aight only time i tie my shoes is when they loose no need to be tight//
ima leave him mental and ill have him seeing black and white stripes//
^Not a bad opener, good personal^

fo the rest his life wonderin why he aint able to pic up a mic//
cuz he got verbally abused by this master killa i aint see why he tried//
only thing thats stryped is the lines on the road just look to tha side//
^Need to keep work on the structure, not bad^

he say he fliipin me in different directions,he only sad cuz he aint got muscles to be flexin//(strectched my bad)
bringin him down like he was stresson raps worst aint u learned ya lesson//
^Not your best bar^

vocal eviction he got it like mobb deep but more twisted//
3 months from now ur name will still be unlisted//
^Nice best bar so far^

battlin someone with the verbal tension,burn him with my venom give him a infection//
im from colorado ull be the first to get a lethol injection//
^Nice bar structure gone again, need to keep the lines tight^

ya verse was so bad moderator needs to put a suspension//
aint no need to say ya wack but its a flow i gotta mention//
^Nice close^

Strype come out nice in this battle, flowed nice, structure
was good but come out at times. More Creativity then VV
and I think the punchs he droped hit harder and had better
personals,,,..

VV, again come out nice in this battle but the structure was
pretty messy, made it hard to flow from a reads point of view
but it was good at times when you kept it tight. Creativity
was their but you did feed off his verse. Had some hard hitting
punchs but I think ~S~ won had a better verse and was more
consistent.

Vote~Strype