Bleek you need to improve ur structure majorly dawg the way u type is gonna hold u back it ruins ur flow its hard to read and u cant spot out the personals the wordplay and metas multis that well.
Brother: an aight verse basic structure ok punches personals and some good wordplay too. Much better than ur opponents i think it was 1 sided from the outset Brother u got this on all catagories.
V/Brotherhood
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